"Suspected 2 b HIV+"
De long wait @ physio dept: corridor ws disgusting n de laborious work of begging de teachers 2 sign de most untidy n incomplete of ur records is quite an art in itself.Waiting 4 something interesting 2 turn up,i could see a lady (dats a misonomer ,u ll find out as u read,if only respected women r 2 b called ladies)walking all alone 2 me.
De attire ws street cheap,de flashy red would turn u colourblind n u had run off 2 find other reasons 2 keep ur stare running.De sari ws worn carelessly enough dat its purpose ws minimal.De seemingly deliberate skinny revealations added 2 de momentary vulgarity,tho she din realise dat.De smile ws seemingly artificial,yet luring and de jewellary had run out of fashion long ago.De overdose lipstick sucked and de flowers on hair showed off.Even sans de walk,curls,curves n figure,she did manage 2 draw de eyeballs on de verandah nw dubbed her ramp.And before i could collect more details 4 u,she came near me n kept de smile running.
"Wers de jyothis centre." I couldnt make out de fucking tvm slang.I asked her 4 de slip in her hand.She ws supposed 2 b sent 2 jyothis ,de counselling centre in de college.
And @ end of slip ,de result read "Suspected to be HIV+".
Rather dan being sad 4 her ,i ws busy confirming de image i built of her in de short span of time.
She sumptuously offered me another smile n ws on her way.Wat ws she??? De guess of de porno monger in u n me iz rite.Not a call gal,if my notion dat call gals hv model like curls n wore bollywood still holds.And she din seem wicked enough 2 b de cruel brothel runner wid dos macho bodyguards aside,if de movie stereotypes r 2 b believed.Yeah i had 2 settle 4 a less sinful n more vibrant term,prostitute.But ryan ,hw can u b so prejudiced???,i asked de good samariat in me.
But i ws sure my guess ws all rite coz u can never ever ask a woman if shees a prostitute n morover, i always wanted her 2 b a prostitute.Or else ws de thrill of having talked 2 a prostitute all digging into me???
On my way 2 canteen,i just new one thing" de smile still haunts me ".i tried 2 plug in some music into my ears n i new i ws not listening.
But y did she smile?????????
"Ws dat her marketing tool 2 drive in de prospective customers?"
"Does she find de people in our college all de more interersting?"
"Were many medicos already in de list of her loyal clients?"
"O ws it her natural reaction 2 de opp: sex?"
"Or ws dat her ultimate fuck me tag?"
And i stopped hating girls who wore tshirts written "pls c my face also".
But den hw can she smile???????
Is she still not told she is gonna die soon???
May b dat job iz left fresh 4 de counsellor.
Or did she always wanted 2 die???
May b she thot death is a better option.
Or ws she de courageous lady hu din worry???
May b she doesnt leave anyone 2 worry 4.
.As dey say"it takes nothing 2 smile,so y not".
De path 2 canteen is over and de food n frens r beckoning me n i ws back 2 my senses.
De Akon music in my ears ws,
"nobody wanna c us 2gether,buddy no matter,no".
I refer 2 de smile n me if u thot something else.
Music 2 has reached its sarcastic levels.
Well,i had enough reasons 2 make my blog running.As my lazy lunch reached its end,i saw myself rushing 2 mythri park so as 2 catch de perfect climax 2 my story.Nothing happened n nobody turned up. I took de disappointing walk 2 de anatomy lecture hall.
Soon i ws in de evening bus 2 de hostel n as it reached de medical college jn:,n just wen i ws about 2 4get de entire incident,i happened 2 catch a faint glimpse of de lady hoos counselling session ws obviously over,but clear enough 2 figure out de 2 things i wanted 2 no.
"De smile ws still running
and she ws still all alone"
rjV PROCLIMED
2008 JAN 6, 00:20
rjvachas.blogspot.com
De long wait @ physio dept: corridor ws disgusting n de laborious work of begging de teachers 2 sign de most untidy n incomplete of ur records is quite an art in itself.Waiting 4 something interesting 2 turn up,i could see a lady (dats a misonomer ,u ll find out as u read,if only respected women r 2 b called ladies)walking all alone 2 me.
De attire ws street cheap,de flashy red would turn u colourblind n u had run off 2 find other reasons 2 keep ur stare running.De sari ws worn carelessly enough dat its purpose ws minimal.De seemingly deliberate skinny revealations added 2 de momentary vulgarity,tho she din realise dat.De smile ws seemingly artificial,yet luring and de jewellary had run out of fashion long ago.De overdose lipstick sucked and de flowers on hair showed off.Even sans de walk,curls,curves n figure,she did manage 2 draw de eyeballs on de verandah nw dubbed her ramp.And before i could collect more details 4 u,she came near me n kept de smile running.
"Wers de jyothis centre." I couldnt make out de fucking tvm slang.I asked her 4 de slip in her hand.She ws supposed 2 b sent 2 jyothis ,de counselling centre in de college.
And @ end of slip ,de result read "Suspected to be HIV+".
Rather dan being sad 4 her ,i ws busy confirming de image i built of her in de short span of time.
She sumptuously offered me another smile n ws on her way.Wat ws she??? De guess of de porno monger in u n me iz rite.Not a call gal,if my notion dat call gals hv model like curls n wore bollywood still holds.And she din seem wicked enough 2 b de cruel brothel runner wid dos macho bodyguards aside,if de movie stereotypes r 2 b believed.Yeah i had 2 settle 4 a less sinful n more vibrant term,prostitute.But ryan ,hw can u b so prejudiced???,i asked de good samariat in me.
But i ws sure my guess ws all rite coz u can never ever ask a woman if shees a prostitute n morover, i always wanted her 2 b a prostitute.Or else ws de thrill of having talked 2 a prostitute all digging into me???
On my way 2 canteen,i just new one thing" de smile still haunts me ".i tried 2 plug in some music into my ears n i new i ws not listening.
But y did she smile?????????
"Ws dat her marketing tool 2 drive in de prospective customers?"
"Does she find de people in our college all de more interersting?"
"Were many medicos already in de list of her loyal clients?"
"O ws it her natural reaction 2 de opp: sex?"
"Or ws dat her ultimate fuck me tag?"
And i stopped hating girls who wore tshirts written "pls c my face also".
But den hw can she smile???????
Is she still not told she is gonna die soon???
May b dat job iz left fresh 4 de counsellor.
Or did she always wanted 2 die???
May b she thot death is a better option.
Or ws she de courageous lady hu din worry???
May b she doesnt leave anyone 2 worry 4.
.As dey say"it takes nothing 2 smile,so y not".
De path 2 canteen is over and de food n frens r beckoning me n i ws back 2 my senses.
De Akon music in my ears ws,
"nobody wanna c us 2gether,buddy no matter,no".
I refer 2 de smile n me if u thot something else.
Music 2 has reached its sarcastic levels.
Well,i had enough reasons 2 make my blog running.As my lazy lunch reached its end,i saw myself rushing 2 mythri park so as 2 catch de perfect climax 2 my story.Nothing happened n nobody turned up. I took de disappointing walk 2 de anatomy lecture hall.
Soon i ws in de evening bus 2 de hostel n as it reached de medical college jn:,n just wen i ws about 2 4get de entire incident,i happened 2 catch a faint glimpse of de lady hoos counselling session ws obviously over,but clear enough 2 figure out de 2 things i wanted 2 no.
"De smile ws still running
and she ws still all alone"
rjV PROCLIMED
2008 JAN 6, 00:20
rjvachas.blogspot.com
6 comments:
u just rock da...really gotta change de term 'blog' 2 'bold'..very nice one...i didn't know u had a blog..i am just a new comer 2 dis world of blogs...so senior..keep rockin..waitin 4 nother shockin piece of write up...!!!
hmm...good stuff
but if i may add...please avoid writing in the sms lingo.
regards
Shayan
try and avoind the lingo u have used. small sentences and sms, its fine. long posts, gets irritating. :)
great post!
nice post..but the lingo's the problem..it ld be apt if you use normal english
its a nice post ...but work upon ur lingo..:) all the best,
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